a mountain of glass
haiku no. 2
a mountain of glass
in the upper corner I
down them all at once
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11 Nov. 2022
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Moon Desert
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BA in Cultural Studies
Crime Fiction: Love
Poetry: Friend
Psychology: Salvation
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