Elegy for the Writer
Traces of a Life Written, Now at Rest

The desk has become a tideline
of what was once a shore.
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The jars of ink have hardened into obsidian,
their depths no longer stirred
by the frantic search for a beginning.
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He was a man who inhabited
the narrow space
between a thought and the first black stroke,
a tenant of the white margin,
always turning into the wind of a sentence
to see where the vowels might scatter.
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Loss did not manifest with a roar.
It was a slow unspooling,
a gradual thinning of the paper,
until his handwriting became a ghost
of its former strength,
the loops of the letters stretching
as if reaching for a meaning
that kept drifting just past the edge of the wood.
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The absence shows up in the objects left behind:
the stack of yellowing legal pads,
the brass paperweight
that no longer has anything to hold.
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The stillness in this room is full of the things
he started but never released,
a thousand unfinished bridges
built toward a land he could no longer see.
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He lived for the friction of the mind
against the flat, unyielding field.
He knew the precise pull of a noun,
how a single word could anchor a memory
or set a whole life adrift.
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Now the meter of his heart
has finally untethered from the line.
The metaphors have unhooked their claws,
and the adjectives have let go of their colors.
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There is no longer a need for the scratching of the metal,
the desperate hunt
for the exact curve of an 'S'
or the sharp tug of a 'T.'
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What remains is the trace of the effort.
It sits in the indentation left on the blotter,
a faint map of a journey through the night.
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The poem he was always writing
has finally reached its perfect state,
a clarity that requires no ink,
a music that needs no ear to be heard.
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He has become the very thing
he spent a lifetime trying to describe:
the wide, unprinted space,
the hush that is not empty,
the light that stays after the lamp is gone.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Iβm a firm believer life is messy, beautiful, and too short, which is why I write poems full of heart and humor. I am an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. My book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link π
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Fantabulous work Tim! Very poignant! π
πΌThe antithesis in the opening is brutal yet beautiful. I can clearly feel the shift from the vastness of a shore to the narrowness of a tideline; it is a strikingly accurate portrayal of a lost flow state. πΌThe "unspooling" stanza is a brilliant use of asyndeton. Those breathless steps kept me locked in the tension of that ebbing energy. It feels quiet, yet deceptively heavy. I often take my own inspiration for granted until I am left staring at the tideline you described.