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Rhyme

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By Harper LewisPublished 9 days ago Updated 8 days ago 1 min read
The antithesis of poetry

In the approach of serious matters,

rhyme is a distraction that only clatters

hollow, noisy emphasis on endings,

even if it causes the middle’s rending.

When it’s forced it gets no worse,

language mangled by a curse

that cares not for what came first,

obliterates it via verse.

Whitman knew this, broke the form;

art does not follow others’ norms

for the sake of untrained ears,

tossing salt to save the tears.

I abhor rhyme robbed of reason,

it’s a form of linguistic treason:

Language longs to lavishly linger,

tracing mouths with agile fingers,

and it tends to flee in shame

when sacrificed in rhyming’s name.

I prefer a last-line zinger.

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About the Creator

Harper Lewis

I'm a subversive weirdo nerd witch who loves rocks. Intrusive rhyme bothers me. Some of my fiction may have provoked divorce proceedings in another state.😈

My words are mine. Suggest ai use and get eviscerated.

MA English literature, CofC

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 8 days ago

    I am fine with most poetry forms, but there are those with the equivalent detestation on non rhyme 😁

  • Rain Dayze8 days ago

    Love it!

  • Nice time to rhyme, great work

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