The concrete garden cracks its skin
where silicon used to scream
Will a verdant tide come rushing in
to end the digital dream?
π₯
We traded wells for server farms
and lakes for a faster feed
now nature hangs her head in shame
because of frantic greed
π₯
The clouds are dry, the rivers ghost
to keep the cooling fan
We toasted to a hollow host
and lost the soul of man
π₯
Each pixel cost a gallon's breath
to cool the metal brain
We chose a fast and flashy death
instead of falling rain
π₯
The servers drank the rivers dry
to render empty art
While hollow code began to fly
and tore the world apart
π₯
We sacrificed freshwater springs
for prompts on polished glass
While thirst began its bitter stings
amidst the dying grass
π₯
We laughed at lies of painted light
and pictures made of code
While silence claimed the quiet night
down every parched abode
π₯
Will petals bloom where giants fell
in dryness deep and vast?
Will there be a green and growing funeral bell
for a world that could not last?
This is my entry for Tim Carmichaels unofficial challenge. You can read about it here:
Authors note: I chose to write my piece in the future where our world couldn't last the massive amounts of water stolen by AI. It's a problem. I am not trying make anyone feel bad, just trying to raise awareness. Water is a finite resource. Please keep that in mind before generating just anything.
-Sara
About the Creator
Sara Wilson
I love Ugly Things.
I try and be active AND interactive.
I write... whatever I feel.
Sometimes it's happy.. sometimes it isn't. But it's real. And it's me.
Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insight
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters


Comments (3)
This is true! I know because I researched it by asking ChatGPT π€£
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